Be sure to carefully proofread the paper and correct spelling and grammatical errors.  The paper does not flow very well in spots, and some of the information should be rearranged.  There are also some extraneous items that are not really pertinent to the article; too much background/space filler.  Try to focus and add more pertinent details. The highlighted portions of the article/paper with yellow and green are written by my instructor, please update/fix them with the best possible way you can thank you. The same refrences can be used, since the paper is being edited. Also, additional resources may  alsobe used.