I am applying to the University of Houston C.T. Bauer College of Business. I would like for you to edit and if neccessary rewrite parts in my personal statement. 
Schools link:  https://www.bauer.uh.edu/graduate-studies/prospective-students/ms-scm/ 
Below are instructions from the schools website on what the should be explain in my personal statement:

Your personal statement will describe why you want to pursue Supply Chain Management, why you believe you will be successful in the MS-SCM program at the C.T. Bauer College of Business, and how you plan to be successful in an SCM career. Why did you choose Supply Chain Management? What do you know about it? What life experiences have formed your perspective and opinion? How have your life experiences prepared you for this program? What is motivating you to pursue this career path? What are your plans for your career once you get the degree? Will you be pursuing an internship/coop while studying? How will you envision yourself in this career? Writing a strong personal statement is one of the primary ways that the admissions committee is able to understand who you are as an individual and whether you will fit well within our program.