This are the improvements that my teacher suggested: – all body paragraphs need to have evidence, add to the ones that are missing!!!!- Gramatical errors and spacing errors need to be fixed.- Think about how to put the authors into conversation with each other (maybe by laying out the information from your sources as if the authors were saying themselves).- define any terms that a general audience might not be familiar with. – include page numbers when using in-text citations for scholarly articles.-I think that you do a good job of addressing issues. Think about how to best structure them and how to best engage all of your sources. -better explain sources.  However, any other improvements are welcomed! I want an overall better essay that will get me an A.